University Application Review & Essay Editing

Description

Hi! I’m Oscar I offer professional university application review for high school students applying to Canadian universities (especially competitive programs). I help students polish their personal statements, supplemental essays, and activity descriptions so they clearly communicate who they are — without sounding generic or forced. About Me • Second-year student in Engineering Science at the University of Toronto • Successfully admitted to one of Canada’s most competitive undergraduate programs with $40000 entry scholarships • Familiar with Ontario (OUAC) applications, supplemental essays, and engineering/science admissions expectations • Clear, honest, and constructive feedback My Highschool ECs: • Student Council Vice President – Represented students at York Region Presidents’ Council (YRPC) meetings – Collaborated with school administration and board representatives • Tech Crew President – Led technical operations for school events and assemblies – Coordinated teams, equipment setup, and live troubleshooting • Founder & President, Physics Club – Established a student-run physics enrichment club – Organized problem-solving sessions and concept discussions • Founder & President, International Students Association – Built a support network for international students – Acted as a liaison between students and school administration • Business Club President – Led workshops and discussions on entrepreneurship and finance • Peer Tutor – Provided academic support in math and science – Helped students improve understanding and confidence • Student Panelist & International Student Ambassador – York Region District School Board – Represented student perspectives at board-level events – Supported outreach to international students and families • Logistics Volunteer, CCYAA (Chinese Canadian Youth Athletic Association) – Supported large-scale community events – Worked with high-profile guests including Jeremy Lin and Simu Liu ✅ What I Review • Personal statements & supplemental essays • Engineering / STEM applications • Activity & leadership descriptions • Structure, clarity, tone, and impact • Grammar, flow, and conciseness How It Works • Detailed written feedback + suggestions • Line-by-line edits (optional) • One revision round included • Online / remote review Rates & Packages • $40 – Single essay review (up to 750 words) Package Deals: • 2 essays: $75 • Full application review (3–4 essays): $150